SCOTT HAS BEEN MAKING steady improvements to his “Best Bets” page. This is his latest effort.
FROM SCOTT: Hello Ed, hope all is well. Here’s this month’s “Best Bets” page. I redid the header and used your tips so hopefully this is an improvement. Thanks, Scott
1. This page seems to have a better organization and structure than the previous version.
2. The header is improved, but have you considered screening it to gray so it’s not quite so heavy?
3. The drop caps seem a bit too large for me. Try something in a condensed sans serif face, perhaps only four lines deep.
It will be interesting to see what others say.