SCOTT RETURNS THIS WEEK with a recent center spread design.
Hello Ed, here’s a fun A&E doubletruck I did…tried to keep it simple and clean, and I really worked on my headline…hope that’s improving as well as I am trying to work it. Thanks, Scott
Overall, I really like this spread. It’s clean, it’s simple. It’s clear. Some notes:
1. Nice balance with the placement of the headline and the photo.
2. Would rather see you use a lighter italic on the drophead, to get better contrast.
3. Did you consider centering the headline and drophead?
4. Extra space at the top of the sixth leg.