HERE’S AN OLDIE from Michael, finally making its way to the top. A quick note from Michael, then the page and Ed’s thoughts.
[This] page started with the economic development as the centerpiece with several graphs but the murder conviction appeal turned into the dominant news story. I still tried to use a graphical element with the economic development story. Looking forward to your feedback!
1. Not sure why the murder appeal is more important but I trust you to know what matters most to your readers.
2. I like the economic development package but wonder if any of the highlighted counties are in your area. You do note that Horry County had no major job announcements. If that’s the case, why does this story matter to your readers.
3. Sure with you could do something about that garish ad at the bottom. It’s really poor. I think it cheapens what you’re trying to sell: the Carolina Forest Chronicle.