PAT’S A PERSON of few words. Ed also is brief in his evaluation of the pages she sent.
2 photo pages from the Lovell Chronicle …
1. Really like the lead photo…and the shot of the boat at the bottom right. But, why is the horizon slanted in the top photo? Like a picture that’s tilted on a wall, I want to reach into this page and straighten out that top photo!
2.Really don’t like the “Day at the lake” typeface. Seems to me you could have found something a bit less stark. No, I am not recommending use of a funky font here…but a classy serif italic would have worked well.
3. Thanks for leaving at least a bit of negative space (at the bottom left).
4. Thank you, too, for placing a caption below each photo, instead of making readers have to roam all over the page to make sense out of which caption goes with which photo.