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  1. On ballet story, agree with Ed on gradient, ribbons, no type below dancers. I would have broken the first line of the hed at the comma. I also think the far right column of the story should align vertically with either the top of the hedline or with the rest of the story. Would also have made the wrap around the dancers wider, since they’re such a large element. The sidebar text could have been inset more and leaded out more to contrast with the story and not leave as much empty space at the bottom. You definitely needed an art element at the bottom of the sidebar box, so that was a good instinct — maybe some judiciously cropped pointe shoes or something.

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