3 responses to “Pages from: Jay Dickerson | The Galena Gazette

  1. Kristin Coker

    I agree with Ed about the nameplate. There is soooo much going on that you can’t really see anything except a big blob of color. Try losing the picture behind the name and making that promo pic a cutout and anchor it to the reverse bar that you have your dateline in.
    I really wish you didn’t have that ad at the top; it looks garish.

    I like tints on breakouts but not on photos, and never that large. Try using different typography to make the package stand out.

    Your centerpiece on the secod page is good but I would scrap everything else.

    Your sports mast could be updated a bit. Try playing around using a different font or moving it to the center. Play around with the dateline maybe underneath SPORTS (maybe in a reverse bar type); these are just suggestions. Just don’t overwork it. The point is to be simple, elegant and tasteful.

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