2 responses to “Pages from: Leslie Pugmire Hole | The Redmond Spokesman

  1. Kristin Coker

    I like your pages. Yes, they need a little tweaking here and there, but the overall design is pretty good.
    Ed is right about the tint boxes. They really only work if they’re in breakouts or smaller graphics, not centerpieces.
    One thing bothered me on your feature page. The “All aboard” headline would have looked better if you made it lighter and put it in the lower right part of the picture instead of the sky. I think it would probaly have popped more with the sky more visible and more space between your headline and your mast head.

  2. Marc Stumbo

    Flush left body – absolutely. I would have tried putting the subhead down in the grassy area and made the main head lighter (per Kristin) and bigger.

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