MELANIE BYER HAS OFFERED pages for comment during the past few months. And here’s another.
Here’s Melanie’s page. Her note follows.
I’ve been getting in a rut doing 1A centerpieces with the typical square or rectangular box containing them on the page. So, for this centerpiece about used-oil recycling, I thought I’d do something different. I got the background image from Metro Creative Connection, and I think it worked well. The only thing I don’t like about the page is that the rules on each side of the centerpiece seem to be floating. I wasn’t sure what to do with those. Also, as a note, a color version of the top mug shot could not be found, and the ear ad had to stay in the top left corner. I like constructive criticism, but keep in mind that I’m 22 and that although I’m not so new to design, there are still things I know I can learn.
So, let’s give Melanie some feedback. And remember: keep it constructive. Thanks.