One response to “Pages from: Darah Patterson | The Greer Citizen

  1. I really like the Sushi headline. Very creative. The chopstick in the headline is also a neat feature, as are the smaller chopsticks. On the first page, I would’ve made the BMW pic a little bigger and run the story under it. That way the police grant story could run to the right, separated by a rule. I think this would fix the pancake look and also give the page a pair of vertical elements that it needs to balance out the square homecoming package

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